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The opening credits roll And there stands you and I Face to face, eye to eye Silence falls between us And the fireworks light up the sky While I pray that this moment Will last us a lifetime And I know it must have been Somewhere in between The fireworks exploding above us And the pitch black night around us that you unlocked the door to my heart And we fell in love. And as the movie rolls on Something starts to feel wrong. Suspicion, lies and deceit Fill the silver screens While the opening scene Becomes a broken memory Faded out with misery The closing credits roll And the pain takes its toll With tear stained cheeks And a soaked pillow But I know it must have been Somewhere in between The shattering of my heart And my world falling apart That the movie cuts its feed And I fall asleep |
I love this! I mean it I really do and I can really relate to it right now. I'm not sure though but I think you could make the end a little more dynamic. You could also add something between stanzas 3 and 4. It seems to be lacking something there. Other than that very nice.| Posted on 2008-06-10 00:00:00 | by SaddenedSongbrd | [ Reply to This ] | |