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    dots Submission Name: In Limbodots
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    Author: jayisademon
    ASL Info:    20/m/il
    Elite Ratio:    3.66 - 90/47/51
    Words: 208
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 48
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsIn Limbodots
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    Scream the wolves asleep.
    Pray to god to wash
    the blood from the gutters
    of these black streets.

    This is the Summer Of Man.
    No 45 caliber killer,
    just guns for hire at the lemonade stand.

    Think about the future
    and prepare to taste lead.
    Make a call to the mayor
    and tell him
    to bring out his dead.

    Let's tag em
    and bag em.
    We've got a
    mess on our hands.

    But never you mind.
    We'll take to the palace
    Hold the evangeline
    at gunpoint
    until they meet our demands.

    A high speed getaway
    has left me semiconscious
    Let my jailhouse tapes
    become media fodder.
    I've lay down the gun
    Now I lay the daughter.

    Jesus help me now.
    Hell is my certain destination.
    I'd go there now,
    but I can't afford gas
    at the filling station.

    So what's a boy to do,
    when he has nowhere
    to go.
    Should I bend to the
    gatekeeper and prepare
    to blow?
    Or do I not need yet
    to sink that low?

    I guess for now
    I'll hang my body
    from a noose by the window.
    While my soul dances
    with ghosts
    in a drunken limbo





    Submitted on 2008-06-10 13:55:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like it. It really pulled me & got ahold of me.
    | Posted on 2008-06-11 00:00:00 | by hateyourlove | [ Reply to This ]



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