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    dots Submission Name: Heart is Antedots
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    Author: BlazeFlamme
    ASL Info:    22/m/TX
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 23/160/138
    Words: 136
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsHeart is Antedots
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    I step forward every time
    Despite what I know suggests
    I approach scared and blind
    Pain puts me to the test

    Next chance I get I'll try again
    Until the outcome improves
    With no risk there comes no gain
    Nor comes a thing to lose

    My heart is big and strong
    It endures all the pain
    Painful words to and from
    Hurt it all the same

    And then I try again
    I get left or leave another
    At some point I will win
    We will be right for each other

    Until that time I'll stay alert
    Keep your eyes peeled, don't let love pass
    Find new ways to cope with hurt
    But don't stall, it can be gone fast

    But there is always a choice
    Ante up or fold your hand




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