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    dots Submission Name: addicteddots
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    Author: annezah
    ASL Info:    19/f/long island NY
    Elite Ratio:    2.5 - 14/15/16
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 541
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       what i feel when im away from you <3 michael


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    dotsaddicteddots
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    all i need is one touch
    and i twitch for your honey
    the taste of your nectar
    your exactly where i want to be
    the feeling of certainty
    the feeling of stability
    im lost in your trance
    whenever i catch your contact
    i love you more than life
    and i need you more than air
    waiting for you to come to me
    is goosebumps and rising of hair
    the pain seems almost worth it
    because of the vibe that you give
    i guess im just addicted
    while it kills me slowly, i still need you to live




    Submitted on 2008-06-11 07:32:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I can understand this. If it's not love it's infatuation, but their both addicting. Good work
    | Posted on 2008-06-12 00:00:00 | by jayisademon | [ Reply to This ]
      nice but a little clinging you'll scare someone
    but I get your point
    | Posted on 2008-06-12 00:00:00 | by littlepoet | [ Reply to This ]


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