Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • ES Magazine
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • Video Tutorials
  • RolePlay
  • 90% off Amazon
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: this is not reason, this is a fool's dreamdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: pioneerheart
    Elite Ratio:    4.6 - 190/178/112
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 43
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 688



    Description:
       it's just a lil love poem


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsthis is not reason, this is a fool's dreamdots
    -------------------------------------------


    You were in the shadowed, corner
    truly, I didn't know who you were.
    And, like the knight of knaves,
    you rushed the days, across the wind to lands afar.

    Only you know where your heart lies,
    just as I know this affinity, exposed and directed towards your Northern Star, drifting in the atmosphere, hoping you see me in your dreams.

    Oh, love, don't you know I can save you with my
    blessed affections?
    Lest, you come my way, my velvet heart suffers instead.

    The echoes are kept secret by the mountains,
    where I wailed this passion.

    Love me and you will never void again.




    Submitted on 2008-06-11 22:04:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      Sweet. Pretty.

    Ends strong. Last line reminds me of Christianity. You will never hunger, thirst, or know spite or pain (etc... can't recall the particulars. i'm one of those dodgy protestants who doesn't really give a fark).
    Big love.
    Strong love.

    Like oceans and riptides, it is.

    Yep.


    Makes me want to go, "Aw."
    But I don't, because I'm tough and strong.
    Uh huh.




    *
    | Posted on 2008-06-13 00:00:00 | by diamondmind | [ Reply to This ]



    Full Anime Episodes Streaming Free
    5 million youtube videos all rated over 4.7 stars with 40+ ratings

    [ Copy this | Start New | Full Size ]

    Google
     

    [ Chrispian ] [ Write Forum ]
    [ Friends ] [ SNESroms ] .
    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry
    This user has been inactive for more than 5 days.