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    dots Submission Name: rewrite Youthful Soldierdots
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    Author: koolness
    ASL Info:    17/female/city of evil
    Elite Ratio:    2.58 - 80/106/56
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 894
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 732



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    dotsrewrite Youthful Soldierdots
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    Blood seeping into the ground,
    Limbs thrown with every explosion.
    Boold filled trenches and,
    pale white faces.

    Bodies lieing on the ground,
    Not a word spoken or a sound heard.
    The night is quiet and filled with enemy footprints.
    Sweat upon his his brow and dirt on his young face.
    Mind set on doing was he was sent to do.

    Hidden well he sees them passing,
    Hoping this feeling won't be lasting.
    He is blind. Blind from the darkness.
    The enemy sourrounds him.
    Bullet shot in the back of his head,
    The youthful soldier falls down dead.
    The battle is over and lives lost,
    and the victory unclaimed.




    Submitted on 2008-06-11 22:10:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is a rewrite??? Try spellcheck.net and post it then.
    | Posted on 2008-06-12 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]


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