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    dots Submission Name: A Lesson In Languagedots
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    Author: BestxDeceptions
    ASL Info:    18, Female, Kentucky.
    Elite Ratio:    2.4 - 22/49/41
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 119
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 762



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    dotsA Lesson In Languagedots
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    Speak to me in your foreign tongue.
    Show me love from where you've come.
    The best love,
    is that of which you don't understand.

    Choose a topic
    and I'll listen to you form the words.
    I may not understand your thoughts
    but I will listen.

    I can pretend that
    I find you interesting.
    I could imagine a world where you're
    close behind me.

    It's ok to lie.
    I've done it too many times,
    to look past. Only I
    lie to comfort, not to hurt.

    Sometimes it seems as if,
    you're a German and I'm from Spain.
    Never the less,
    when you talk to me, I can hear. Can you?




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      I think you might have been watching a spanish guy talking on TV and imagining what it would be like if you owned him. ?????
    | Posted on 2008-08-08 00:00:00 | by ArchusMuta | [ Reply to This ]


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