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    dots Submission Name: When One Becomes Twodots
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    Author: jayisademon
    ASL Info:    22/M/SoILL
    Elite Ratio:    4.24 - 129/81/88
    Words: 141
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsWhen One Becomes Twodots
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    What if there was no beginning?
    Even worse no end?
    So while I'm laying next to you.
    Where should I begin?
    How I love the idea
    that one can become two.

    I want to be charming.
    Believe me I'm doing my best.
    I try a little everyday
    so long as this heart
    continues to beat in my chest.

    So let's sing a little.
    Just about the praises.
    and the clichés of the glory of love.

    When does too much become enough?

    I can't even imagine
    this dream I have.
    Where I wake up with
    someone for whom I care.

    I'm more accustomed
    to rolling over to the thought
    of nothing but air.

    So let's promise,
    when we decide
    that one can become two
    that you won't let me
    fall in love with you.




    Submitted on 2008-06-12 21:08:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      "I can't even imagine
    this dream I have.
    Where I wake up with
    someone for whom I care.

    I'm more accustomed
    to rolling over to the thought
    of nothing but air."

    thats amazing. the words and the emotion just mesh into this brilliant poem. you have quite a way with words.
    ali
    | Posted on 2008-06-22 00:00:00 | by Ali Marie | [ Reply to This ]
      <<So let's promise,
    when we decide
    that one can become two
    that you won't let me
    fall in love with you.>>

    Jaysie, this is cool, I understand that for I never let myself fall in love, until I'm sure we're altogether drowning in that lifetherious whirlpool of blinding love.
    peace,
    | Posted on 2008-06-13 00:00:00 | by maymistery | [ Reply to This ]


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