What I don't like: "pungent scent?" I can deal with this, especially in this poem because it flows well and fits within the structure of the poem. I prefer to "show don't tell." Instead of telling us about a pungent smell, show us.
What I do like: I think I do get the title this time. Your illustrating to us what an altered (for whatever reason) state can do to a person's perceptions. "Molecular seepage" is inventive. Good. "Corpuscles" is a good, specific, almost seducing word that gives us a hard, fast image. The last 2 lines are solid as well and bring the poem home and give us insight into the speaker's drifting emotions.
This write speaks to me of a lady of the night that only seems to be seen at night entertaining her clients
Though short I believe you spoke perfectly in this and your message was transposed perfectly
The last line sums this write up perfectly
An excellent choice of words!!!
I would also like to add it was Great seeing you posting again
Its been awhile since Ive read anything new from you