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    dots Submission Name: diet of the minddots
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    Author: magnicat
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    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsdiet of the minddots
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    i choose each day
    a healthy regime
    beginning with light faire

    a simple prayer of awakening
    dressing my day in gratitude
    garnishing my thoughts
    with care

    light snacking on curiosity
    yet always aware of my surroundings

    a dose of roughage is always welcome
    chewing on new ideas
    helps digestion for reflection
    to keep me regularly in tune

    if heavy thoughts do intrude
    starch-stiff in attitude,
    i release the hold
    my brain has taken
    and return
    to empty
    mind





    Submitted on 2008-06-12 23:12:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Cat,

    They say that strength of spirit can heel the body, and your current diet seems just the thing. This is a perscription that we should all start taking. I'm sure it would do more good than the newest fad in supplements.

    Praying for you, but i also know that strength of mind and spirit will hold you in good grace through whatever comes.

    jan
    | Posted on 2008-07-23 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]
      EXCELLENT EXCELLENT WRITE CAT!!!!!!!!!!!!
    In this write I can strongly feel how life has taken a very Positive and to be perfectly honest a quite beautiful turn for you
    I am so Happy for you Cat
    You deserve all the Happiness you can get
    Never in my Life have I met a person who is more in touch with the animal world and Cat you are now getting the Love back you so unselfishley have dealt out your whole life
    Its a Beautiful life with God guiding us forward isnt it
    How I wish I could show everyone just how Beautiful life is once you give your life to God and let his Love guide you forward
    Enjoy it Cat!!!
    I believe you now more then ever understand just why I am so dedicated to my Faith and always keep a Positive attitude


    May God continue to Bless You and keep Helping you to Continue to Move Forward

    God Bless
    Ron


    Bootsy and Den Den and Scarlet send all their Love as well!!!!
    | Posted on 2008-06-14 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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