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    dots Submission Name: Abundantlydots
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    Author: The Gadfly
    ASL Info:    51/M/Moreno Valley, CA
    Elite Ratio:    3.55 - 1035/1330/360
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 61
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 460



    Description:
       ABAAB format; eight syllables per line

    A thank you to God.


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    How blessed the hand, which fed me then,
    abundantly that feeds me still.
    No thought have I to question when
    such favor might come to its end.
    By faith, I know it never will.

    The landscapes change without regret.
    Sunrises set each day anew.
    I pray each day to not forget
    the daily fish within my net,
    for my delight, because of you.

    The Gadfly







    Submitted on 2008-06-13 02:53:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow. There is so much joy and respect in this piece. I very much enjoyed that you are humbled, but still rejoicing in this work.

    As a whole, I loved it. From beginning to end. Kudos to you.
    | Posted on 2008-06-13 00:00:00 | by Celeste J. Bell | [ Reply to This ]


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