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    dots Submission Name: your love this touch this kissdots
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    Author: ty
    ASL Info:    21 male
    Elite Ratio:    1.49 - 281/221/215
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 70
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 498



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    dotsyour love this touch this kissdots
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    could you hide the scares of love from your your heart
    those lushis lustful lips of yours are like mine a sinners kiss
    from the soul of mine you crept into like angel loving devil
    no beauty more beautiful my eyes are yours for all time
    the skin of a goddess unravel my life and loves all that is me
    like dreams like wishes they come true my life before my eyes
    together we are heart soul body forever this will always be
    your love my touch this kiss




    Submitted on 2008-06-13 11:01:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      whoa! this is AWEOSME! it could have been slightly longer. but still this is a great writting.
    | Posted on 2008-06-13 00:00:00 | by amanda99737 | [ Reply to This ]
      the best i have ever read
    you are really good
    it gave my heart with a image i did not want to let go of
    | Posted on 2008-06-13 00:00:00 | by thelovly | [ Reply to This ]


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