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    dots Submission Name: Eye of the Benevolentdots
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    Author: Max Million
    ASL Info:    16/M/DRA
    Elite Ratio:    2.57 - 30/52/66
    Words: 151
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 53
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    dotsEye of the Benevolentdots
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    He watches you
    He scrutinizes you
    He plots against you

    The benevolent eye
    Of our benevolent leader
    Ever watching
    Forever wise

    He says we need faith
    They say we need to work
    We comply
    We faithfully work

    But bombs fall
    Children, mothers, fathers die
    Still he says
    "The Party is supreme"

    They march through our towns
    We fear them
    "They will eat your young"
    Our benevolent leader says

    But they do different
    They give us food
    They help rebuild
    Then we see the others

    Skeletons of old neighbors
    Walking through the streets
    Looking for their homes
    Taken away by the benevolent leader

    You can't blame us
    For being blind
    Twas he, who killed
    Our benevolent leader is to blame

    His eye watches no more
    Silenced by the hammer
    But what of this new benevolent leader
    His red eyes watch us all the same




    Submitted on 2008-06-13 13:20:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this piece is kinda scary, as well as it makes a very good description of the world today.
    its nice to see soemthing about substantial issues..
    keep em comign :)
    | Posted on 2008-06-14 00:00:00 | by Little Gal | [ Reply to This ]
      hey and hi
    i really enjoyed reading this and am going to add it to my favorites

    i think yor post saz alot about the world right now from my pespective because my knowledge and history of my generations go bak to the 1930's

    this piece kind of puts it all in order
    and my hats off to you
    this is one of the few that i've read on this site that i can say that made me stop and think

    thanx
    sandman
    | Posted on 2008-06-13 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      try no flash/ poe
    | Posted on 2008-06-13 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]


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