Discord Subnormia by Sheakhan

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Submission Name: Discord Subnormia dots

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Author:	Sheakhan
ASL Info:	21/M/FL
Elite Ratio:	5.84 - 163/162/70
Words:	78

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	60
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	553

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I refuse to comply with your request.

I find compliance to not be compulsory.

Eradication of the non-radical mind reveals the true kaliedoscopic nature of human brain function.

Succumbing to your instincts, urges, wants, and fancies is the purest way to live.

Just don't lose sight of self preservation.

Though technically this is self-preservation.

Some people stuff their dead pets and keep them...
I'm just trying to keep my childhood.
I

Discord Subnormia dots

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Erratic I may be,
though I assure you it's intentional.

Illogical and whimsical,
my self restraint is fictional.
Or at least hidden quite well.

Convoluted reasoning?
It might just be a clever ploy.

Jovial and trivial,
my sterner side is vestigal.
So technically, I do have one.

I build my puzzle from mismatched bits,
and attempt to make sense of it.

It's been said I am possessed
of a quizzical nature.

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  Ron
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| Posted on 2008-09-28 00:00:00 | by ever | [ Reply to This ]
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| Posted on 2008-06-20 00:00:00 | by JenFlynn | [ Reply to This ]
  This write I really like
I like how you speak in riddle form letting the world know you will never give up yopur youth
My Friend I am a 39 year old man and I can honestly tell you I will never ever completely grow up
There will always be my youth carrying me
I really enjoyed this
I almost felt like you were writing this about my life
Excellent work!!!
Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
Thank You
God Bless
Ron
| Posted on 2008-06-13 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]

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