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    Author: every48seconds
    ASL Info:    16/M/Everywhere
    Elite Ratio:    3.27 - 97/113/103
    Words: 151
    Class/Type: Rant/Betrayal
    Total Views: 43
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 812



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       Ugh umm mainly i was pissed, not a fan of angered writing , especially my own, read whatever just a bad day


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    I love her / well no fucking shit you do
    I mean like i really do / NO SHIT
    So why she do it? / Do what, you meancheat on you, go ride some random guy and then tell you, taking advantage of the kindness?
    Yeah those. . . why? / Cause your to damn soft
    Huh? / As in you take to much damn shit
    So what do I do / you leave the hoe!!
    ugh everyone says that / point being? they are right
    No / YES
    Mabye / now its a mabye?
    JUST a mabye / moron
    Mabye that too / . .
    . . so you going to leave her?
    . . . No / Whatever

    I look up, she walks over
    kiss me on the cheek
    Says whats up
    I say
    Nothing / I'm leaving

    This is my example of confliction




    Submitted on 2008-06-13 18:50:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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