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    dots Submission Name: Goodbye Daddots
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    Author: kearra
    ASL Info:    15/F/VA
    Elite Ratio:    1.29 - 0/2/14
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 72
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 546



    Description:
       i love my dad but maybe its time to let go


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    dotsGoodbye Daddots
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    Dad, you've been gone a long time.
    I think the last time I seen you I was nine.
    You say you'll be out early.
    Then why dont you try to hurry?
    Is it that bad?
    To TRY to get back what you had?
    You say you miss me.
    But all I see-
    Is a moms boyfriend and a step-dad.
    It really is sad.
    Why did you do what you did?
    You had the perfect woman and me your kid.
    I know your hating your life so just-
    Tie up some clothes in a sack.
    and come on back.




    Submitted on 2008-06-14 16:41:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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