I think that it was a good write. However like jayisademon said it is very clichéd. I do disagree that it is unoriginal because everybody's work is different. I think it can use some improvement but it still is a good write. Keep writing and the better you'll get.
This piece is extremely clichéd, unoriginal, and that made it a boring read. You have tackled a subject here that is an easy one to understand and relate to, but you didn't do anything to it, to make it your own. There is no individual flair to it, anyone could have done it.
Submission Name: Let Go
