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    dots Submission Name: I'm a natural lady dots
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    Author: littlepoet
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    dotsI'm a natural lady dots
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    I'm determined by nature
    far from artificial
    simple & sincere,
    I love to think
    I have some talent
    or I'm fooling my self.

    I love realism
    art and literature
    I take from nature,
    what it teaches me
    I also love animals & plants
    I'm part native.

    I have an amiable smile
    I'd love to think I'm not coy
    I hide my sadness with a cheer,
    nor my looks
    I'm short with curly hair
    & with glass to correct my vision.

    I do not wear makeup all the time
    I like my natural flaws
    some say I have a simple wit,
    with a lot naivete
    a bit of a nitwit at times
    when my weak heart guides me.

    but do fear where my fellow man is going
    a dreadful storm that nature sturring
    so when my storm -beaten soul is cloudy,
    days are cleared with sunshine
    like crystal rose sparkling through
    the light dancing at it's edges.

    I'm mindful and aware that mother nature
    has no fear she bears
    quite a power that abounds,
    she is the queen
    and like no other
    she makes thing pure.

    unlike me small and stocky like a pug.




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    ||| Comments |||
      I liked it. I think you have some beautiful imagery.

    I also think it's empowering to hear someone talk about the natural beauties of a woman instead of the artificial ones.
    | Posted on 2008-06-18 00:00:00 | by BestxDeceptions | [ Reply to This ]


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