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    dots Submission Name: Thoughtsdots
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    Author: Maskannai
    ASL Info:    28/Female/Utah
    Elite Ratio:    4.94 - 214/184/78
    Words: 51
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
    Total Views: 463
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    Bytes: 315



    Description:
       Just a little thoughtful about something meaningful..


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    dotsThoughtsdots
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    The most difficult and depressing thing
    for any human being to have to live through
    is the knowledge they have an illness,
    a disease they have been afflicted with
    either a few years or their entire life,
    a disease medical knowledge and science
    has yet to find for it a cure




    Submitted on 2008-06-14 23:24:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      True words my Friend but I do feel this write is missing something
    Perhaps a little more info as to how an illness affects a persons life or how illness may affect those who care about that person
    As I said it is a Great start though
    If you do decide to change this write Please let me know as I would Love to read the finished project

    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2008-06-15 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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