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Submission Name:
Blame Won't Change
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Author:
BlazeFlamme
ASL Info:
22/m/TX
Elite Ratio:
1.81 - 23/160/138
Words:
298
Class/Type:
Poetry/Serious
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I don't know if this is going to fit into a book of poems, fuck the books though. I write this one for me.
Blame Won't Change
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Lift your chin up
Don't be such a puss
Pain takes time to heal
Don't make such a fuss
Don't be such a baby
You fucking hypocrit
You know you hurt her first
You deserve what you get
You aren't so fucking special
You have no divine grace
You led yourself to hell
And hell you'll have to face
So quit wishing for tomorrow
For it may never come
Your dreams are simply foolish
You don't deserve such fun
You try to act all innocent
Like you didn't see your fate
Like it took you by surprise
And you noticed it too late
You knew this would happen
Don't be such a fool
You played a game of chance
You, yourself, the tool
You took for granted what you had
You know you wanted more and more
You tried to change her just a tad
Forgot what you changed her for
You created this lack of bliss
You created this hurt
You anted up and took a risk
You got what you deserved
Now don't try to act innocent
Don't be so naive
You can fool others, not yourself
The truth is clear to me
Your actions were rash and reasons transparent
The veil you used is flawed
Don't just think, try and be coherent
Watch who you point the fault
Blame is so easily transferred
Because it's always a partial thing
But you have just as much as her
You have no right to weight the blame
So get over your problems
It's so non productive
To live in the past
The depression's not worth it
Quit pointing fingers
Because your luck fell through
This was bound to happen
And now it happened to you
Submitted on 2008-06-15 02:00:05
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