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    dots Submission Name: Let's Go Ride Our Bikes! or Why I Hate Naturedots
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    Author: JanePlane
    ASL Info:    125/F/Sarasota,FL
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 30/24/18
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 125
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       Joke: A kid with ADHD says, "Why did the chicken cross the road?" The kid she's talking to shrugs. The kid with ADHD says, "Hey! Let's go ride our bikes!" I'm the ADHD kid--all grown up.


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    dotsLet's Go Ride Our Bikes! or Why I Hate Naturedots
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    sun playing between
    kelly green leaves;
    cold river rushing between
    bare legs.

    skin scraping sharp
    stone
    on
    the
    way
    down.

    my feet plunging deep between
    rocks,
    slick and wet, under the current
    nipping at me as I slide stuck between
    peaks,

    leafy-green giggles,
    limbs entrenched in muddied water;
    sharp shallow breaths,
    lovers laughing
    their skin on skin slipping smooth between
    water and rocks and me and breathing,

    sucking me in deeper, blowing breeze cool between
    my sun-hot face
    and . . .

    my young son says,
    “Those people are naked. Thank god we’re upstream from his sperm”

    “Thank God.” I gasp.

    My legs are bleeding.







    Submitted on 2008-06-15 13:04:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      gave me a good laugh, especially the last line - well done!

    peace, love and all that other junk,

    joe
    | Posted on 2008-06-19 00:00:00 | by joeyalphabet | [ Reply to This ]
      gorgeous. really, really gorgeous. i adore the ending. you are brilliant.
    | Posted on 2008-06-15 00:00:00 | by blackbird | [ Reply to This ]



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