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    Author: koolness
    ASL Info:    17/female/city of evil
    Elite Ratio:    2.58 - 80/106/56
    Words: 122
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
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    I wish that I can be near you. I wish that I can hold you, kiss you. Hopefully somed ay you'll be mine. I long to be comforted by your warm embrace. I wait patiently for the day when you come back into my life. I miss you.
    Will you come back to me?
    I don't want to lose you. Yet, I can't lose something I never had. But, I am yours. You have my mind, my body, and my soul. Y ou have all of me. No one can love you like I can ....No one.
    Till then, I shall still love you. I'll love you always.
    Yours Forever and Always,
    Katelin

    P.S. Don't drift to far....Come back to me....




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      in dreams unanswered there are no endings,
    no rules, no common folks held in suspence. poe

    | Posted on 2008-06-16 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]


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