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    dots Submission Name: I Am Abledots
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    Author: WhY-dO-yOu-CrY
    ASL Info:    17/F/ConnUSA
    Elite Ratio:    5.51 - 131/79/78
    Words: 83
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 45
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 515



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    dotsI Am Abledots
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    My head is aching
    Like a thousand jack hammers pounding against my skull.

    My eyes are itching
    From the tears I had shed before.

    My arms are burning
    Caused by the cuts that I created in anguish

    My fingers are numb
    From the blood loss of my numerous gashes

    This is what I feel.
    This is what I am.

    I will not become what you picture as right.
    I will not change and forget this honorable fight.




    Submitted on 2008-06-16 10:26:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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