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    dots Submission Name: a small partdots

    Author: isaiahc4
    ASL Info:    26/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 120/198/62
    Words: 244
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
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    dotsa small partdots

    I have made some bad mistakes
    yet some how I know.
    That my best outweighed my worste
    quite some time ago.

    I have my moments I'll admit
    at times I want to disagree.
    Yet it is not these moments
    that makes me who I choose to be

    I always try to do my best
    though at times I may fall short.
    most my goals I have reached
    when times get tough I don't abort.

    this is what defines me best
    makes me who I am today.
    when things are at thier very worst
    I refuse to walk away.

    They say that i'm a stuborn man
    I chose to say I'm driven.
    But I could never turn my back
    on this blessing I've been given.

    I live by values bleed for love
    and fight for my beliefs.
    I feel no physical injury
    yet I'm devistaded by emotional grief

    loyalty,duty,respect,selfless service,
    these are a small part of who I am
    honor, integrity, and personal courage
    the reason why men like me chose to stand.

    I am a soldier, a father, and husband
    I leave my family for you.
    because I believe in the goodness of man
    and I'll always fight for the right and the true.

    I stand for the colors bleed for my country
    I'd die for the men by my side.
    I'm an american soldier, I'm proud to be
    out here along for the ride.

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