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    dots Submission Name: Everything and Nothing [first draft]dots
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    Author: doppelganger
    ASL Info:    19/f/your brain
    Elite Ratio:    1.68 - 27/194/138
    Words: 440
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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       Yes so, my best friend and I went for a walk to this park out in the middle of nowhere a week or so ago. It was pitch dark and around midnight. It was so calming that we decided to strip naked and dance around. This is how it felt.


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    dotsEverything and Nothing [first draft]dots
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    Smiling epochs of humanity floated on above
    Underneath
    A water sky
    Plato wrapped us in lace in the delicate sublimity
    Right
    Left
    Each foot in time with ancient lore
    As we passed into another realm
    It was the first walk of the beginning
    The final walk towards a retributal death
    Some god reached down
    Caressed us and blessed us with secrets
    Whispered from the tree's ivy
    The dead tree promised
    There, the pages unfolded
    The archaic book opened for we knew the combination
    Our feet were newly shod with ancestors' shoes
    We danced primitive
               As newborn children with newborn souls
    There is no shame here, no falsities
    Life is life
    Death is death
    And death sighed
    For we were offered the opium sky-pipe
    In the pages of a 19th century romance
    In our skin we trod on the blood of the damned
    While we drank the laughter of the blessed
    As we floated on and on in the airy quicksand of space and time
    No need for names
    It goes unsaid
    No need for speech
    The earth knows
    On our backs was the calligraphy of Callisto
    For we were dancing naked in the Pantheon of ancient Rome
    While it rained liquid truth
    Smoky emotion
    No, it didn't hurt
    Though we were stripped of ego
    Replaced with pure, raw, unpoisoned
               poetry
    All life died while the dead poets made love underground

    This is surreality
    An alternate reality

    Creation, we witnessed it
    We broke the flesh of that fabled apple
    Sucked out the juice with our minds and nourished our beings
    We rejoiced in the haiku vomited by Euripides
    With our minds, the Berlin Wall of morality was destroyed
    The lyre
    The harp
    The scythe
    All in time
               swooped down to make us their children
    While Aphrodite spoon-fed us heroin of the gods
    All illuminated by the lamps of eternity

    I stood there
    At the ending of the beginning
    And the beginning of the end
    In stillness
    While the poets of old were resurrected
    And whispered while screaming holy
    And ancient verses in my ears
               they went straight to my soul
    Even god had to lift a pen to stain that tablet

    Who could not cry but a widow of the earth?
    For it was then that certainty of uncertainty married
    Contentment.
    And it was we who held that quill which wrote the history of
    Eternity
    With the ink of the blood of Eve and Adam
    And held the final judgment




    Submitted on 2008-06-16 23:04:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      It honestly sounded like something that could only be experienced in a purer time, or through the help of some solid drugs. The way your described it, seemed unrealistically real. I cant quite put my finger on it. The experience is larger than almost anything ive ever experienced, but it seems attainable, reachable, to me and to anyone else willing. Something about the night, a forest, and absolute freedom with nature, seems to be the recipe for some sort of soul search escapade. In all, the writing was subtle, mysterious, calmingly eerie. I enjoyed it. +fav
    | Posted on 2008-06-18 00:00:00 | by Passionbyapathy | [ Reply to This ]



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