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    Author: essence of life
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    The life I live is a wonderful lie you ask me why, because I let it be.

    I chose the life of a puppet but now I feel a change.

    In attitude an in how i'll live my life.

    But I wonder is it to late or to early for me to die and be reborn?




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      I sometimes feel that the life i live is a lie as well like its not really my life...and im not going 2 get into faiths and stuff like that but i think we could reborn if we so wish its possible...but of course only we have the power to change our lives wether it be a good change or bad change...i like poems like this that make you think about things its well put together good job ^_^
    | Posted on 2009-01-22 00:00:00 | by Twin_Snakes | [ Reply to This ]


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