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    dots Submission Name: Ashameddots
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    Author: The Gadfly
    ASL Info:    51/M/Moreno Valley, CA
    Elite Ratio:    3.55 - 1035/1330/360
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 54
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 730



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    dotsAshameddots
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    Ashamed to miss this special shot,
    distracted by life's daily grind.
    Undoubtedly, this very spot
    was chosen by the one who brought
    these pictures of a different kind.

    A moment's stillness draws the eye
    and glancing up, the clouds take pose.
    God's picture-perfect alibi
    as Nature breathes her reverent sigh.
    An open door is bound to close.

    How many masterpieces wind
    before the unrepentant gaze?
    Refracting light streams, prisms find
    each darkened heart and fickle mind
    ashamed to offer thanks or praise.


    The Gadfly











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