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    dots Submission Name: jenny, by flight of the conchordsdots
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    Author: gwenn sundala
    Elite Ratio:    3.71 - 76/70/51
    Words: 631
    Class/Type: Cheesy Joke/Comedy
    Total Views: 1314
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       so there is a famous band called flight of the conchords from new zealand, and a friend and i wanted to turn this song of there's into a script, but we didn't have lyrics or nothing. so here it is. type in flight of the conchords; jenny on youtube to see the video of the original performance. enjoy!


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    dotsjenny, by flight of the conchordsdots
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    jenny; hello
    bryan; ÖhiÖ
    jenny; how are you?
    bryan; umÖgood, thanks
    jenny; youíre looking good.
    bryan; pardon?
    jenny; i said youíre looking good.
    bryan; fair enough...
    jenny; jenny.
    bryan; pardon?
    jenny; jenny.
    bryan; no iím sorry i think youíve mistaken me for somebody else...
    jenny; no itís me, iím jenny my name is jenny...
    bryan; oh ye...hahaha...oh i thought...what a hillareous misunderstanding...nice to meet you jenny.
    jenny; weíve met before.
    bryan; ohe yes, of course we have...i meant that it was nice to meet you the time that i met you...where was it that i met you the time that i met you when i met you?
    jenny; at a party.
    bryan; thatís right...wasnít it one of those boring work parties?
    jenny; ......no......
    bryan; thatís why i said wasnít it...it was the party of a mutual friend, was it, wasnít it, was it, wasnít it...
    jenny; yes.
    bryan; yeah, i thought so...bobbyís?
    jenny; no.
    bryan; dudís?
    jenny; no
    bryan; d-dogís?
    jenny; no
    bryan; maxwellís?
    jenny; no
    bryan; ......andyís?
    jenny; yeah andyís
    bryan; yeah andyís party! thats right...andy knows how to throw a party doesnít he jenny?
    jenny; oh, i love andyís parties!
    bryan; andyís parties...what crazy parties...how is that guy anyway?
    jenny; sheís fine...
    bryan; oh thatís right...andy hates it when i forget that...
    jenny; we watched a movie...
    bryan; yesss...it was something like but not nessecarily schindlerís list. we watched it and wept...
    jenny; ......it was police academy 4......we went for a walk.
    bryan; on our feet if i remember correctly
    jenny; we walked to the top of the hill and we ate sandwiches!
    bryan; oh weíd just grab a sandwich and just put it in our mouths...oh, thatís the only way to have sandwiches! tell me jenny, do you still walk? do you still get into sandwiches in a big way?
    jenny; i still walk a lot but iím not eating as many sandwiches as back then...do you remember what we did at the top of the hill?
    bryan; ......kind of......
    jenny; we were standing at the look out.
    bryan; oh i remember exactly what we did on the lookout...we just looked...out...across the city from our little spot on the hilltop. oh it was so pretty from way up there...we talked about how the lights from the buildings and cars seemed like reflections of the stars that shone out so pretty and bright...that night...
    jenny; it was daytime...
    bryan; the daytime of the night...
    jenny; do you remember what you said to me?
    bryan; not word for word actually, jenny, but i remember there were some verbs...
    jenny; well, you said Ďmeet me here in one yearí, you just needed some time to clear your head...and you seem to have done that...
    bryan; lalalalalalalalalalalalala...
    jenny; we have a child
    bryan; pardon?!
    jenny; we have a child.
    bryan; why didnít you tell me, jenny? why didnít you tell me that day when we went to the top of the hill and we made sweet, oh how we made such sweet sweet sandwiches? does ot have my eyes? my way with words? does it look like me at all?
    jenny; no not at all cuz we adopted him! i canít believe you donít remember, it was a very difficult process!
    bryan; *stamers a bit* ooohhh......are you sure that was me, jenny?
    jenny; yes, iím pretty sure it was you john......
    bryan; ............iím bryan...
    jenny; oh my gosh, iím so sorry...
    bryan; oh donít worry jenny...
    jenny; oh no, thatís terrible, oh how embarrassing!
    bryan; oh no donít worry! jenny, actually iím kind of relieved...that kind of thing just happens all the time...i just got one of those faces, i suppose...
    jenny; so does john, heís got one of those faces as well...
    (both laugh nervously)

    (end)





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