Lost in a spinning room,
I'm stuck inside.
Locked in my troubled mind
Where all my problems lie.
I can't find out what's
Wrong with me
She's trying to change me from who I
Want to be.
Stuck in the body of a
Seventeen year old.
But my mind is somewhere else
Can someone please help?
I'm trapped in a place
Where no one understands me.
I am lost, I am stuck
In this place just let me be.
This is an interesting piece. It has an abstract confusion to it, echoing the message of this poem. You have captured the struggle and angst of the typical teen very eloquently with this.
Keep writing!
Submission Name: Trapped
