Not Your Problem by Xillie

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Submission Name: Not Your Problem dots

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Author:	Xillie
ASL Info:	16/F/USA
Elite Ratio:	1.69 - 2/5/10
Words:	45

Class/Type:	Poetry/Venting
Total Views:	61
Average Vote:	4.0000
Bytes:	288

Description:
This one is kind of emo... I was ticked and depressed... Most of it doesn't even rhyme, I was venting....

Not Your Problem dots

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I hate it here
Behind my tears
Watching my world disappear

I hate my life
So let me leave it
Behind in a crimson stain

So what if I don't understand?!
Who cares if I give up?!
It's not really your problem!

Submitted on 2008-06-17 12:56:42 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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it is just like you said aint it? Emo....and venting....what caught my attention were these lines:

"I hate my life
So let me leave it
Behind in a crimson stain"

all in all....short but precise!

KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK
-OB
:)>

| Posted on 2008-06-19 00:00:00 | by obaid | [ Reply to This ]
I agree, you're right. Kinda freaked out by the whole emo feel though.
| Posted on 2008-06-19 00:00:00 | by deadbeat_88 | [ Reply to This ]

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