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    dots Submission Name: The Deity Of Egodots
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    Author: jayisademon
    ASL Info:    20/m/il
    Elite Ratio:    3.66 - 90/47/51
    Words: 282
    Class/Type: Poetry/Satire
    Total Views: 83
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    dotsThe Deity Of Egodots
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    Please allow me
    to start to feed my ego.
    It shits out my mouth,
    and feeds your ears.

    Let's Sing The Mantra.

    "I am one,
    And one is plenty.
    Let's Pray to God,
    we live past twenty!"

    We build up the revolution
    in old coal towns.
    Where the rifles will one day
    march proudly from the underground.

    I'll be there on a pedestal,
    Fat as an English King.
    Feasting on the flesh of children
    while the remaining
    come to me to sing.

    What a glorious world
    we live in when the ego reigns supreme
    Where you wipe the dirt from your face
    and massage into it a high exfoliating cream.

    Let's sing the second refrain.

    "One is him,
    and strong is one.
    Forever our father,
    forever his son."

    God, what a mind I've got.
    Even Lazarus envies me.
    I've led the revolution,
    opened the eyes of the blind who see.

    Let's Sing the Coda.

    "Now I am lost,
    but with I'm found,
    He'll lead me to the graveyard
    Just ouside of town"

    I'll be King,
    The dictator Imperial.
    If you plan on stopping me
    You must do it now.

    What a land of lust I'd breed.
    Junkies in the alleys who
    get exactly what they need.

    Whores who run rampant,
    devouring seed with haste,
    who don't do it for the money,
    but because they love the taste.

    It's a wicked world we live.
    and my ego is reality.
    We pray to the dollar,
    the most unforgiving deity.

    Hail Lust, Vice, Greed, and Death.
    Because you are already dying
    when you take your first breath.





    Submitted on 2008-06-17 15:31:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      "Hail Lust, Vice, Greed, and Death.
    Because you are already dying
    when you take your first breath."

    those are some really intense lines... they are excellently executed too. nice write!
    ali
    | Posted on 2008-06-22 00:00:00 | by Ali Marie | [ Reply to This ]
      Damn. I mean damn. Really captures our times. Some of your lines are a little awkward, but it works here.

    What a land of lust I'd breed.
    Junkies in the alleys who
    get exactly what they need.

    Whores who run rampant,
    devouring seed with haste,
    who don't do it for the money,
    but because they love the taste.


    Love these stanzas especially. Excellent, powerful images/metaphors.

    Rock on, man. I'm seriously impressed here.
    | Posted on 2008-06-19 00:00:00 | by JAvery | [ Reply to This ]



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