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Submission Name:
9th March
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Author:
FallenAngelJC
Elite Ratio:
3.4 - 47/53/41
Words:
181
Class/Type:
Lyrics/Passion
Total Views:
139
Average Vote:
3.0000
Bytes:
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Description:
To truly understand this...please spare a moment and watch the clip below...
9th March
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9th March - 1 litre of tears
In the Middle of changing seasons,
I casually feel how long the day is,
In the midst of restless busy days,
You and I, paint our dreams,
Place our love on the winds of March,
A Cherry blossom sprout will move on into spring,
Little Specs of overflowing light,
Warm up the morning, little by little,
By your side, when you're embaressed,
After a Big Yawn,
Standing at the entrance to a new World,
What I noticed, was that I wasnt alone,
By closing my eyes,
The you, who I see behind my eyelids,
Has somehow helped me become stronger, right?
I too want to become like that for you,
By closing my eyes,
The you who I see behind my eyelids,
Has somehow helped me become stronger, right?
I too want to become like that for you...
Submitted on 2008-06-18 14:15:51
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I thought this sounded like some sort of Japinse song. I've heard enough through games and anime to recognize the style of writing.
| Posted on 2008-06-30 00:00:00 | by
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I really like the imagery of this piece, and the motive of this piece. The longing to be the only person someone else can think about, the way you think only of them. This is a marvelous piece, and I would be proud of it.
| Posted on 2008-06-19 00:00:00 | by
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