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    dots Submission Name: Turn on the radiodots
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    Author: love_confusion
    ASL Info:    15/f/ct
    Elite Ratio:    1.63 - 4/19/23
    Words: 130
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 54
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsTurn on the radiodots
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    Lock the door shut and ignore all the shouts
    Don't let the screams turn your dreams upside down
    Turn on the radio so you won't hear their sounds
    Turn up the volume and sing away your desires
    Let the music carry you to a world beyond yours
    Let the music ease the pain that for so long you've endured
    Let the beat and the rythm be directions to your next destination
    Loose yourself for a minute, a less minute of antisipation
    Let all that's irrelevant go along with the flow
    Just think about yourself, that and nothing more
    Turn on the radio, blast the music all the way
    Don't let emotions fill your heart with pain
    Follow the music thats leaving a trail
    Remember this and you will never fail...




    Submitted on 2008-06-18 17:11:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I think you have a pretty solid work here. It does get a bit repetitive, and has a couple spelling errors. But that is stuff that can be easily overlooked. The idea I think is more strong than the poem itself. The idea of turning on some music as an escape. It is an extremely easy to relate to topic. Kudos On a Job well Done.
    | Posted on 2008-06-19 00:00:00 | by jayisademon | [ Reply to This ]



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