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Nymphomaniac


Author: EEKS
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Nymphomaniac



I think I always knew I was addicted to you
And it was unhealthy
I had trouble breathing
But it was just impossible, completely irresponsible
And you pushed me in too deep
And now I'm a fucking freak

You wanted to be my first
and whats worse
was I wanted to be yours
We were both just impossible

All the words falling through my arms have me
Falling apart in all the right pieces
And everything I wanted isn't very much more
Than the wind in my face and someone new to meet
I think I always knew I'd be a nympho
Something inside me felt too empty
And maybe I knew you'd never be the one
Something in me just felt too empty

You wanted to be my first
and whats worse
I wanted to be yours
We were just impossible

You wanted to be my first
and its worse, cause you weren't
and you can't even be my second or third
Its simply impossible






Submitted on 2008-06-19 01:17:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I like the cruel twist at the ending...
| Posted on 2008-07-08 00:00:00 | by caveman | [ Reply to This ]
  Filling and filling and filling, trying to cram enough of something into that space that only this person could occupy. Just so you'll stop feeling hollow. Sex, food, music, stuff...

... Yeah.

You wanted to be my first
and its worse, cause you weren't
and you can't even be my second or third
Its simply impossible


And there's a lack of punctuation at the end of that--like the thought just keeps moving through space....
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| Posted on 2008-06-25 00:00:00 | by etheror | [ Reply to This ]


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