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    dots Submission Name: Message Sentdots
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    Author: JanePlane
    ASL Info:    125/F/everyplane
    Elite Ratio:    6.76 - 419/435/131
    Words: 50
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 861
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 352



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    dotsMessage Sentdots
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    there is a freedom in
    sending words out
    where they become air

    fly wings
    that buzz in the ears

    until swatted away

    they need not be weighted with consequence

    they only need release
    lest they die banging
    against their own reflections.





    Submitted on 2008-06-19 11:38:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ha, this is all so true.

    emphatic.
    concise.
    nice.

    cheerio.
    | Posted on 2008-06-24 00:00:00 | by discombobulated | [ Reply to This ]
      This write verifys something I try to tell all those who I give comments to
    It is so Healthy for us as humans to put the thoughts we feel inside into words and let them out
    I know through my own experiences how much better I felt after I let out some emotions through words
    KEEP WRITING AS IT HELPS HEAL!!!
    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2008-06-19 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      the male emperor moth can smell a female emperor moth up to 7 miles away. this piece is, once again, absolutely lovely. you are such a great writer. and your so perfectly concise. you and i are masters of the one-liner. much love,
    merlo
    | Posted on 2008-06-19 00:00:00 | by blackbird | [ Reply to This ]


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