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    Author: koolness
    ASL Info:    17/female/city of evil
    Elite Ratio:    2.58 - 80/106/56
    Words: 26
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
    Total Views: 1076
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 128



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    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsquote thingdots
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    I'd rather be deaf before I hear you cry, blind before I see you hurt,, and be dead before I see you taken away from me....




    Submitted on 2008-06-19 15:00:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Nice, but short.
    Great, but small.
    Awesome, but WAY TOO TINY.

    I want to hear more.
    Try expanding.

    (Also, you did a double-comma thing.)

    (Also again, why is it titled "quote thing"?)
    | Posted on 2008-06-20 00:00:00 | by WhatYouWill | [ Reply to This ]


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