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    dots Submission Name: Soulmate for a timedots
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    Author: Ali Marie
    Elite Ratio:    2.84 - 105/106/76
    Words: 69
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsSoulmate for a timedots
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    It's so hard to let you go,
    When I can't remember why I left.
    I only wish that you could know
    The memories that I've kept.
    No matter what I do,
    your face turns up in my head.
    I relive every moment,
    cherish every word you said.
    God sent me an angel,
    I know it, you were mine.
    To be my soulmate,
    If only for a time.




    Submitted on 2008-06-19 19:21:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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