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    dots Submission Name: Anything You want I'll bedots
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    Author: Ali Marie
    Elite Ratio:    2.84 - 103/106/76
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 59
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    dotsAnything You want I'll bedots
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    I know that you love me,
    You say I'm just what you need.
    I want you to know that I can be anything.
    Tell me what you want and that's just what I'll be.
    I'll be Miss America or your Marsha Brady,
    I'll be anyone, I'm your leading lady.
    Please don't leave me, I'm not sure how to be alone.
    I've loved before, but you're the best I've ever known.
    Mold me, use me, you can even break my heart,
    Just promise you'll kill me before you tear me apart.




    Submitted on 2008-06-19 19:25:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is a very clichéd work, but it is still very good. It's somehow clichéd while still being original. Don't know how that happens, but it does. Your piece is easily relatable, and has a strong flow. It is neither too short or too long. You hit it on the head with this one. Good Job!
    | Posted on 2008-06-20 00:00:00 | by jayisademon | [ Reply to This ]



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