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    dots Submission Name: Memory gluedots
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    Author: Ali Marie
    Elite Ratio:    2.84 - 105/106/76
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsMemory gluedots
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    Where are you? I need you,
    please come home.
    Where are you? I need you,
    I can't be alone.
    You kept me sane, now my sanity is lost.
    I'm racking my brain, but you'll still be gone.
    I want just that feeling, the trace of hope.
    Your smile kept me going, I learned how to cope.
    You'll never read these words,
    that were meant for only you.
    I've put myself together from pieces of who I was,
    Only to discover that your memory was my glue.




    Submitted on 2008-06-19 19:32:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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