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    dots Submission Name: Secretsdots
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    Author: WhatYouWill
    Elite Ratio:    5.56 - 36/42/20
    Words: 43
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    Description:
       Inspired by a friend, who was kind enough to ask a question and supply me with an answer.


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    dotsSecretsdots
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    No, you see, secrets are important.
    They rest within you,
    germinate,
    become the beauty that they are

    I, within my heart,
    grow my bouquets of private roses,
    fragrant lavender,
    hollyhock,
    velveteen stars

    You, yourself,
    carry within you a thousand secret sunsets




    Submitted on 2008-06-20 09:33:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this reminds me of lorca in tone and temperament and the mood you create: very gentle, yet passionate and warming, thoughtful... like cold fingers thawing before a winter fire, y'know? that's the immediate response i got from it, but then, i'm weird like that.

    i guess i agree with you that secrets are important; they shape us in infinite ways, show through our eyes and through what we do and say to each other.

    very velvet.
    i like.
    | Posted on 2008-06-21 00:00:00 | by discombobulated | [ Reply to This ]



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