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    dots Submission Name: Being Fireddots
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    Author: brax
    Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 0/1/1
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 89
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       Just yesterday. I asked for 10 words..I got them and they were stringed together withthe help of others aswell.


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    Today was erroneous
    Not an elaborate thought process needed
    a given conclusion
    leading to a headache
    as hard hitting as a concussion
    coming from the derrier of his mind
    he makes his final aruba
    Not taking in my dialectic rebuttals
    ther ewere now lakes instead of puddles
    Another porous moment
    to the point to where my veins bleed sodium
    dry due to the anger
    Ice cream can't fix this matter
    not even a klondike
    No worries
    I still have my radiance




    Submitted on 2008-06-20 17:05:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like this piece. The title especially appealed to me since I knew i was gonna get fired from my last job so i quit. A kind of [censored] you to the boss. You're work is really original and unique, and just has a really stong feel to it.
    | Posted on 2008-06-22 00:00:00 | by jayisademon | [ Reply to This ]



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