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    dots Submission Name: RED RAINdots
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    Author: StarShine1682
    Elite Ratio:    2.12 - 1/2/3
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 53
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 609



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    dotsRED RAINdots
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    Red rain, red rain,
    she's amused as it trickles down.
    As if it were tear drops falling,
    She watches each drop penatrate the ground.
    Red rain, red rain,
    As it seeps, it relieves her soul.
    Her uneasy tempermant deminishes,
    for once, she feels in control.
    Red rain, red rain,
    she's smiling instead of crying.
    It eases her to feel as if,
    she can finally emerge from hiding.
    Red rain, red rain,
    it's calming to feel it drain.
    She closes her eyes, whispering her final words,
    red rain, red rain.




    Submitted on 2008-06-20 20:43:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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