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    dots Submission Name: THE GAME OF LIFEdots
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    Author: StarShine1682
    Elite Ratio:    2.12 - 1/2/3
    Words: 169
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsTHE GAME OF LIFEdots
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    The Game Of Life Life is just a game board
    That you were placed upon to play
    Like figurines moving either back or forth
    Your decisions determine which way.
    It is your choice to make
    You can either fail or succeed
    If you go through life doing the bare minimum
    You will surely follow, but never lead
    When you fall you need to rise
    Get up quickly, and never wait
    Sure, you can choose to give up and quit
    Though you will grow stronger if you repair your mistakes
    Life is a game of strategy
    And you'll lose if you refuse to learn
    To win you must cross every bridge
    Even the ones you have burned.
    Life is just a game board
    That you were placed upon to play
    Now that you've come to that fork in the road
    Look and at the paths and ask yourself… which way?





    Submitted on 2008-06-20 20:46:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hm... I like the flow of this one. Your rhyming is good in some parts. The subject matter is overused and abused by so many writers though. Anyways this is the first time I see you here so welcome!
    | Posted on 2008-06-22 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]



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