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    dots Submission Name: It's All Your Faultdots
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    Author: qwicksilfer
    ASL Info:    23/F/MD
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 3/1/1
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
    Total Views: 104
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 719



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       Very appropriate for Saturday morning. :-)


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    dotsIt's All Your Faultdots
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    Here I sit again shamefully on the floor
    Trying to eat, but can't bring myself to
    It's all such a mess, I try for the door.
    Sprinting, shaking, blaming it all on you.

    You asked me out, to that seedy bar,
    With dollar brews and many guys.
    We drank until we couln't find the car,
    Stumbling, fumbling around with bloodshot eyes.

    We found that cab near the city square
    He took us home, then you asked to crash here.
    When I look at you now I can only glare,
    You forced me to have that one last beer.

    Now we're both suffering from the brown bottle flu,
    I'm just glad I was out with you!




    Submitted on 2008-06-21 09:15:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      That is appropriate for Saturday morning! Good laugh, nice job.
    | Posted on 2008-06-21 00:00:00 | by Sirbongatron | [ Reply to This ]



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