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    dots Submission Name: Flight of the Aerials Idots
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    Author: Max Million
    ASL Info:    16/M/DRA
    Elite Ratio:    2.57 - 30/52/66
    Words: 179
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 67
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    Bytes: 1136



    Description:
       This is the first in my ES only series, Flight of the Aerials. The first two take place in the present day when a crime syndicate (HAMMER) abducts "special" children from a house in New York. The second will shift to the near future.


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    dotsFlight of the Aerials Idots
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    The Gospel Den, a home for the gifted. Alex sat on the floor, just staring at Serena. Both were five, both were from the nearby town of Eden, both were gifted. Mrs. Callahan sat on the couch with both sets of parents. "They're communicating, talking to one another, we just can't hear them."

    Outside, they came. A group of four black sedans pulled onto the stone driveway. Out stepped a mix of black suited men, from Japanese to Russian. Then, they're leader. The masked figure stepped out and stared at the house. "Ist dieses es?" The man beside him nodded. "Ja sollten die Kinder nach innen sein." The leader looked back to the house. "Good."

    The doorbell rang, breaking Alex and Serena's concentration. Mrs. Callahan stood and walked to the door, before she reached it the piece of wood was forced in, taking her down with it. "Alrighty everyone, don't move and you should be fine!" The masked leader, followed by his men, walked into the living room. "Men, round up everyone. We'll explain their situation then."




    Submitted on 2008-06-21 11:07:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Why ring the doorbell then take down the door? Hm.

    I like it though I think this peice should have been longer, I mean, I know you're coming out with another but, this one should have been a little more in depth.

    Looking forward to reading the second,
    ~Carrie
    | Posted on 2008-06-21 00:00:00 | by dismal_s child | [ Reply to This ]


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