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    dots Submission Name: Forgotten Memoriesdots
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    Author: Rannison
    Elite Ratio:    3.08 - 8/3/2
    Words: 233
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 110
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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       My corniness strikes again! Dedicated to RulerxTaki~


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    Forgotten Memories
    By: Rannison



    Can't remember when it was
    I stopped hurting, and began smiling,
    Alone for so long, that bliss seemed gone.
    But it began with that November night;
    Sitting in my car, with you in my sight,
    Nothing ever felt more right.


    Can't remember when it was
    You ceased hating, and started speaking;
    Aloof all the time, a smile a crime.
    But it began with that single phone call,
    Don't know why you picked up, but it changed all,
    And nothing ever felt more right.


    Can't remember when it was
    My face first flushed from your touch;
    Though just a friend, you sought to mend.
    But it began with that laugh and kiss,
    And invoked something subtle but vis,
    But nothing ever felt more right.


    Can't remember when it was
    My fears died, and my tears dried,
    And hope sprung out, where it'd been without.
    But it began with a nervous question
    You answered with no hesitation,
    Then nothing ever felt more right.


    I remember when it was
    I stopped liking you and began loving you.
    Blind for so long, that void is now gone.
    It began with that one November night;
    Sitting in my car, with you by my side,
    Nothing ever was more right.



    -For Sony aka RulerxTaki, my love and my life.




    Submitted on 2008-06-21 12:10:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Omg behb... that made me cry. =[ That was... >.< I cant put it into words. I'm still crying... Listening to Secondhand Serenade, thinking of you, reading this. I miss you so much. -sniffle- and Andre is over there asking what the hell is wrong. I want you home baby, so badly. Oh but this is suppose to be feedback... But I can't find anything wrong with it. It's perfect. And I'm crying harder. Sheesh, I love you so much. I can't even find the right words to say how I feel... If it wasn't for Firefox, I would have so many typos right now... I can't think straight anymore, my heart is pounding, and it all hurts so much. I think you just made me weaker, more vulnerable. But it's ok, cause it doesn't matter. Cause when you get back, we're going to places and doing things. Vegas ='] And at the end of August, Andre's house is a non stop party for two weeks since his mom is going away. Me and you only, nothing will tear me away from your side when you get back. Dammit, I keep rereading it, I keep crying more and more. Thats it, I'm gonna go kill someone. =[ -pulls out knife- poor poor Andre....

    I love you so much, and you're the first boy who wrote anything for me... countless of girls wrote crap to me, but this... this was just... perfection itself. We're still waiting... your wife and kids. And we love you.. (I cant say much for Baron though since he's never met you...) =[ I wanna say more... >[ too embarrassed to say it here...

    x3 Taki <3

    And to those who didn't comment or rate; Drop dead! You're just jealous you jerk wads!
    | Posted on 2008-06-22 00:00:00 | by RulerxTaki | [ Reply to This ]



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