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    dots Submission Name: Juliadots
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    Author: CammyDevlin
    ASL Info:    17/Female/Clarksville
    Elite Ratio:    0.89 - 0/1/10
    Words: 290
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
    Total Views: 53
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1713



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       This is about the tragic death of a young woman.


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    dotsJuliadots
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    It is said that she strides around in the dead of night
    Some people are said to hace fled in fright
    Because her stately appearance is such a sight
    But they say that she is always 'a moaning
    Her cracked lips constantly issuing a groaning
    And that she always draws a ragged breath
    And they also say that it was her spouse that caused her death
    Because of her burns, it is water she will always seek
    Her life had ill turns, and she was frequently weak
    Through the halls of the castle
    She always roams
    Her life there was a hassle
    And she had to die there of all homes
    They say that she always pleads for help
    And that if you strain your ears
    You can occasionally hear a yelp
    And someone burst into tears
    Then you know that it is Julia

    Some people have learned
    That she was once pushed into the flames
    And that is how she was burned
    And the person who did it remains unnamed
    It is said that she always yearns
    And something in your stomach churns
    But some say 'tis just the wind
    Or your mind, harking back on the times you have sinned
    People stay away from that place
    And only those wanting a thrill go there
    Though they still make haste
    But the one thing they want to see is her once-lovely face
    And they also say that those who go in search for her never achieve that dream
    But why people find her and some people don't, that will always be a sieve
    But there is also a rumor that she was seen near a well
    On the grounds of the place she will always dwell




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