All I Ask by arodase

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Submission Name: All I Ask dots

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Author:	arodase
Elite Ratio:	4.36 - 17/19/20
Words:	60

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
Total Views:	94
Average Vote:	4.0000
Bytes:	371

Description:
Inspired from 'All I Ask From You'. (From Phantom of The Opera) Wrote it with the song in my head, hear my cry for you.

*LOVE* you darling~

All I Ask dots

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Speak no more of lies
Or hatred or sadness

I will wipe your tears from you
Even the ones that are only inside you

Please speak no more of darkness
Of sorrow or of coldness

Feel my hands around you
Warm and comforting

Feel my heart beat next to yours
That’s all I want for you.

Submitted on 2008-06-21 23:37:51 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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I think it needs more elaboration. I would stick with keeping it simple and pure, but try to draw it out a bit. Otherwise it was a good piece.
| Posted on 2008-06-28 00:00:00 | by nicodemous | [ Reply to This ]

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