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    Author: babygirl09
    ASL Info:    21/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 69/63/49
    Words: 309
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 510
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1886



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    Today I’m sitting alone
    Waiting by the phone
    I shouldn’t have been so stupid
    To hurt you this way
    I should’ve read between the lines
    Not been so wrapped up in my pride
    I need to get out
    Go for a walk
    Just to make sure I can still breathe
    I have to know if I’m still alive
    The moment you left me
    Everything inside me died
    I should’ve read between the lines
    Not been so wrapped up in my pride
    I need to get out
    Go for a walk
    Just to make sure I can still breathe
    I have to know I’m still alive
    I should’ve said what you needed to hear
    Should’ve been there to catch all your falling tears
    I should’ve never been so stupid
    To hurt you this way
    Now I’m sitting alone
    Waiting by the phone
    Praying inside
    You’ll pick up and call
    The moment I met you I became alive
    Now everything inside me has died
    I need to get out
    Go for a walk
    Just to make sure I can breathe
    I have to know I’m still alive
    The moment you left
    Yeah the moment that door shut
    Everything inside me died
    It was then I realized
    How much I’d hurt you
    By never saying what you needed to hear
    Never being there to catch all your falling tears
    Now I’m sitting here alone
    Waiting by the phone
    Dying even more inside
    Praying that you’ll call
    I need to get out
    Go for a walk
    Just to make sure I can still breathe
    I have to know I’m still alive
    Damnit I should’ve been there
    To catch your tears
    Should’ve said what you needed to hear
    Should’ve read between the lines
    Shouldn’t have cared about my pride
    Now I’m sitting here alone
    Waiting by the phone…




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