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    dots Submission Name: A Statement of Humanitydots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 39
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dots A Statement of Humanitydots
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    There was a giant room dividing all the people.
    There were, twelve people.
    (Male, female, Male.
    Female, male, Female.
    Negative, positive, Negative
    Positive, negative, Positive.)
    This is as big a statement as they wanted to make.





    Submitted on 2008-06-22 17:01:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      "Male" is positive and "Female" is negetive . . . interesting.
    | Posted on 2008-07-11 00:00:00 | by Solomon Disease | [ Reply to This ]
      It's short and kind of bland. I could see it as everything has its complement, but I would be incorrect to think that is what this is.
    With that, I don't care much for it and despite my efforts can't gather much meaning from it.
    Which probably is part of the purpose of the whole thing.
    The last line is my favorite and the reason this is a solid poem.
    | Posted on 2008-06-23 00:00:00 | by Sir Jimeth | [ Reply to This ]
      hmm i don't really get this...might be cuz ima about to fall asleep on my keyboard xp.

    ima have to come back to it...i like the way its formatted.
    | Posted on 2008-06-22 00:00:00 | by TheStillSilence | [ Reply to This ]


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